phantom007
Well-Known Member
Sorry for being a few days late, but the Phantom must Phloat-in and Phloat-out.
First, I will love to buy copies of Mayor's publication!
Second, "The BJ Zone" is way too close to "BJ in the Zone" by Rick Blaine (sp?).
Third, suggested covers, while good in their intent, range from "Sh#tty" to "Cheesy", to "Just another BJ Book". Mayor, sir, with ALL due respect, Roadsigns get a glance, as do skylines, but you MUST DO SOMETHING TO DIFFERENTIATE YOUR MASTER PUBLICATION from the rest of the pack!
Fourth, it appears that you desire in this Publication to BOTH educate and share, i.e., Educate on BJ Play, and Share/Educate on you Personal/Life experiences.
THEREFORE, MAY I HUMBLY SUGGEST THAT YOU CONSIDER:
1. Title: "Double Exposure".
2. Sub-title: "How to Win (and sometimes Lose) at BJ and at Life.
3. Cover: "Breasts"! Yes, "Breasts"! Seriously, a couple of well-endowed ladies using "Barney's" as Pasties, with wads of $100's shoved in their G-string panties, beating your face senseless with their "Mammary Attack", while you hold an 8-inch "Stack-of-orange" in one hand, and YOUR 10-inch DELETED-BY-CENSOR in the other! A couple of A-K's shoved in the cleavage would not hurt!
-----Guy's would buy your book, because it showed "Breasts"!
-----Lesbian's would buy your book, because it showed "Breasts"!
-----Girl's will buy your book, because "those Breast's can't be real", and will
want more info. on "who did the surgery"!
4. The Doctor Factor: Several Posters below indicated their respect and/or lack thereof, for your pH.D. (Piled Higher and Deeper). Since I too am a Doctor, on the bottom of the cover-page, you could even state something like: "All Breasts Personally Examined by Dr. Ph.007, and approved for publication."
Please have your publisher forward me $20k cash, so that I can begin the investigation for you.
GRIN!
phantom007.
First, I will love to buy copies of Mayor's publication!
Second, "The BJ Zone" is way too close to "BJ in the Zone" by Rick Blaine (sp?).
Third, suggested covers, while good in their intent, range from "Sh#tty" to "Cheesy", to "Just another BJ Book". Mayor, sir, with ALL due respect, Roadsigns get a glance, as do skylines, but you MUST DO SOMETHING TO DIFFERENTIATE YOUR MASTER PUBLICATION from the rest of the pack!
Fourth, it appears that you desire in this Publication to BOTH educate and share, i.e., Educate on BJ Play, and Share/Educate on you Personal/Life experiences.
THEREFORE, MAY I HUMBLY SUGGEST THAT YOU CONSIDER:
1. Title: "Double Exposure".
2. Sub-title: "How to Win (and sometimes Lose) at BJ and at Life.
3. Cover: "Breasts"! Yes, "Breasts"! Seriously, a couple of well-endowed ladies using "Barney's" as Pasties, with wads of $100's shoved in their G-string panties, beating your face senseless with their "Mammary Attack", while you hold an 8-inch "Stack-of-orange" in one hand, and YOUR 10-inch DELETED-BY-CENSOR in the other! A couple of A-K's shoved in the cleavage would not hurt!
-----Guy's would buy your book, because it showed "Breasts"!
-----Lesbian's would buy your book, because it showed "Breasts"!
-----Girl's will buy your book, because "those Breast's can't be real", and will
want more info. on "who did the surgery"!
4. The Doctor Factor: Several Posters below indicated their respect and/or lack thereof, for your pH.D. (Piled Higher and Deeper). Since I too am a Doctor, on the bottom of the cover-page, you could even state something like: "All Breasts Personally Examined by Dr. Ph.007, and approved for publication."
Please have your publisher forward me $20k cash, so that I can begin the investigation for you.
GRIN!
phantom007.